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Mentor Text Writing Lessons: Picture Books
62 free-to-use lessons: created in Nevada for teachers everywhere

New Feature! Have you seen WritingFix's Bibliography Page, which cites all the books used as mentor texts here at WritingFix? It's an easy-to-use new resource. Click on the image at right!


How did this page of free lessons come about? In 2005, WritingFix and the Northern Nevada Writing Project received a generous grant that helped begin the very popular lesson collection you will find on this page. The $25,000 SBC Grant, acquired with the help of the Washoe Education Foundation, allowed us to create and host a very different kind of inservice class for 100 Northern Nevada teachers, and that inservice created this page.

Members of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Technology Team showcased seven favorite picture book lessons to the lucky 100 teachers who signed up first, then gave away 100 copies of each of the picture books so that participants could teach the lessons back in their classrooms. At the inservice's end, each of the 100 participants brought in a different picture book to share, and wrote a brief proposal for a 6-trait lesson inspired by their books. The best of those proposals became the lessons you can find on this page.

Each year under the instruction of Kim Polson, the Northern Nevada Writing Project offers a variation of the original 2005 Picture Book Inservice. If possible, we still give away some free books, but we can't give away as many as we did when we had a $25,000 grant sponsoring the class. Still, the inservice remains highly popular, and each year we add up to five new lessons here from the class's participants.

Please enjoy these free lessons from WritingFix. If you notice we're missing a student sample of a certain grade level, contact us. We might be able to arrange sending you a new book in exchange for your help in getting one of your students published on-line.

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18 Idea Development Prompts and Lessons:

Lesson title: Using 90th Street's Advice

Lesson's Mentor Text: Nothing Ever Happens on 90th Street by Roni Schotter

Focus Trait: Idea Development (using strong and memorable details)
Support Trait: Word Choice (weaving poetic words into descriptions)

Click on the lesson title or the book cover to read an overview and access the entire on-line lesson and its resources.


Lesson title: Silly Animal Problems

Lesson's Mentor Text: Dog Breath by Dav Pilkey

Focus Trait: Idea Development (creating a unique story based on a model)
Support Trait: Organization (sequencing the events of a story with a graphic organizer)

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Lesson title: Unlikely Diary Keepers

Lesson's Mentor Text: Diary of a Worm by Doreen Cronin

Focus Trait: Idea Development (putting researched ideas into one's own words)
Support Trait: Voice (using deliberate humor in writing)

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Lesson title: The Important Thing about Good Writing: Details!

Lesson's Mentor Text: The Important Book by Margaret Wise Brown

Focus Trait: Idea Development (writing with memorable and strong details)
Support Trait: Organization (paragraphing)

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Lesson title: Unique Imaginary Friends

Lesson's Mentor Text: Ted by Tony DiTerlizzi

Focus Trait: Idea Development (writing with originality and strong details)
Support Trait: Word Choice (using inventive words to enhance descriptions)

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Lesson title: Four Metaphor Poems

Lesson's Mentor Text: Wilfrid Gordon McDonald Partridge by Mem Fox

Focus Trait: Idea Development (exploring details using figurative language)
Support Trait: Word Choice (choosing strong verbs, adjectives, and nouns)

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Lesson title: Emotions & Colorful Days

Lesson's Mentor Text: My Many Colored Days by Dr. Seuss

Focus Trait: Idea Development (using "snapshot" details; painting word pictures)
Support Trait: Word Choice (choosing strong verbs, adjectives, and precise nouns)

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Lesson title: Top Secret Rule Reasons

Lesson's Mentor Text: The Secret Knowledge of Grown-ups by David Wisniewski

Focus Trait: Idea Development (writing with originality based on a model)
Support Trait: Voice (adding emotion)

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Lesson title: Scheming Against an Adversary

Lesson's Mentor Text: Enemy Pie by Derek Munson

Focus Trait: Idea Development (using originality and strong details)
Support Trait: Organization (creating a strong lead and paragraphing with purpose)

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Lesson title: Rolling with the Animals

Lesson's Mentor Text: Duck on a Bike by David Shannon

Focus Trait: Idea Development (using strong, memorable details)
Support Trait: Organization (paragraphing with purpose)

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Lesson title: Fairy Tales in New Settings

Lesson's Mentor Text: Bubba the Cowboy Prince by Helen Ketteman

Focus Trait: Idea Development (writing with originality and strong details)
Support Trait: Organization (sequencing events of a story)

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Lesson title: Scary Somethings

Lesson's Mentor Text: Harry and the Terrible Whatzit by Dick Gackenbach

Focus Trait: Idea Development (using strong and memorable details)
Support Trait: Organization (pre-planning a story's parts)

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Lesson title: What Got Stolen?

Lesson's Mentor Text: Grandpa's Teeth by Rod Clement

Focus Trait: Idea Development (using strong and memorable details)
Support Trait: Organization (pre-planning a story's parts)

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Lesson title: Same-Theme/Different-Story Stories

Lesson's Mentor Text: Six-Dinner Sid by Inga Moore

Focus Trait: Idea Development (focusing on story theme)
Support Trait: Organization (planning a strong introduction)

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Lesson title: Between Repeated Lines

Lesson's Mentor Text: Fathers, Mothers, Sisters, Brothers by Mary Ann Hoberman

Focus Trait: Idea Development (focusing on story theme)
Support Trait: Organization (planning a strong introduction)

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Lesson title: Same-Theme/Different-Story Stories

Lesson's Mentor Text: Fox by Margaret Wild

Focus Trait: Idea Development (focusing on story theme)
Support Trait: Organization (planning a strong introduction)

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Lesson title: Other Bad Cases to Write About

Lesson's Mentor Text: A Bad Case of Stripes by David Shannon

Focus Trait: Idea Development (using strong and memorable details)
Support Trait: Voice (adding emotion to text)

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Lesson title: Showing How to Deal with Anger

Lesson's Mentor Text: When Sophie Gets Angry--Really, Really Angry... by Molly Bang

Focus Trait: Idea Development (reflecting on a personal experience to develop an idea)
Support Trait: Voice (adding emotion to text)

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14 Organization Prompts and Lessons:

Lesson title: Powerful First Paragraphs

Lesson's Mentor Text: Brave Margaret by Robert De San Souci

Focus Trait: Organization (creating a strong opening paragraph)
Support Trait: Idea Development (writing with memorable details)

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Lesson title: A Scientific Mishap

Lesson's Mentor Text: Dogzilla by Dav Pilkey

Focus Trait: Organization (planning for purposeful paragraphs)
Support Trait: Idea Development (using action-packed details)

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Lesson title: Floating Down a River

Lesson's Mentor Text: Daisy Comes Home by Jan Brett

Focus Trait: Organization (planning for sequencing and pacing)
Support Trait: Idea Development (using memorable details)

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Lesson title: Three-Meal Weather

Lesson's Mentor Text: Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs by Judi & Ron Barrett

Focus Trait: Organization (planning purposeful paragraphs and story parts)
Support Trait: Word Choice (choosing powerful adjectives)

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Lesson title: The Sibling Report

Lesson's Mentor Text: Tub-boo-boo by Margie Palatini

Focus Trait: Organization (planning for sequencing)
Support Trait: Voice (imitating authentic, real-world voice)

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Lesson title: Pros, Cons, and Hooks

Lesson's Mentor Text: How I Became a Pirate by Melinda Long

Focus Trait: Organization (planning purposeful paragraphs and strong leads)
Support Trait: Sentence Fluency (using compound sentences)

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Lesson title: Weird Animal Adventures

Lesson's Mentor Text: Tuesday by David Wiesner

Focus Trait: Organization (planning beginnings, middles. and ends)
Support Trait: Idea Development (using memorable details)

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Lesson title: Overcoming a Personified Fear

Lesson's Mentor Text: There's a Nightmare in My Closet by Mercer Mayer

Focus Trait: Organization (using a variety of transition words to sequence a story's parts)
Support Trait: Idea Development (creating an original story)

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Lesson title: Who's to Blame Stories

Lesson's Mentor Text: Because a Little Bug Went Ka-Choo by Rosetta Stone (Dr. Seuss)

Focus Trait: Organization (planning for sequencing)
Support Trait: Word Choice (using onomatopoeia)

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Lesson title: Between Repeated Catch Phrases

Lesson's Mentor Text: Alexander and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day by Judith Viorst


Focus Trait:
Organization (planning for sequencing)
Support Trait: Sentence Fluency (using a variety of sentence types)

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Lesson title: A Vocabulary Fashion Show

Lesson's Mentor Text: Miss Alaineus by Debra Frasier

Focus Trait: Organization (using a variety of transition words)
Support Trait: Word Choice (playing with words' meanings)

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Lesson title: Fracturing Tales Through Titles

Lesson's Mentor Text: The Wolf Who Cried Boy by Bob Hartman

Focus Trait: Organization (letting a title drive original writing)
Support Trait: Voice (adding emotion and emphasis to a scene)

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Lesson title: Start & Stop Paragraphs

Lesson's Mentor Text: If You Give a Moose a Muffin by Laura Numeroff


Focus Trait:
Organization (linking introdiuctions to conclusions)
Support Trait: Word Choice (using powerful imagery)

THIS LESSON IS CURRENTLY UNDERGOING REVISION. PLEASE VISIT THE START & STOP POETRY LESSON (at right) IN THE MEANTIME.


Lesson title: Start & Stop Poetry

Lesson's Mentor Text: Twilight Comes Twice by Ralph Fletcher


Focus Trait:
Organization (linking introdiuctions to conclusions)
Support Trait: Word Choice (using powerful imagery)

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12 Voice Prompts and Lessons:

Lesson title: Start with What Isn't There

Lesson's Mentor Text: Caves by Stephen Kramer

Focus Trait: Voice (establishing mood)
Support Trait: Word Choice (using strong and memorable details)

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Lesson title: I Wanna [Something]

Lesson's Mentor Text: I Wanna Iguana by Karen Kaufmann Orloff

Focus Trait: Voice (exploring and using effective persuasive techniques)
Support Trait: Word Choice (choosing words for persuasion)

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Lesson title: Interjected Emotions!

Lesson's Mentor Text: No David! by David Shannon

Focus Trait: Voice (conveying emotions through interjections)
Support Trait: Conventions (punctuating for dialogue and direct address)

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Lesson title: Unusual Friendly Letters

Lesson's Mentor Text: Dear Mrs. LaRue: Letters from Obedience School by Mark Teague

Focus Trait: Voice (effective persuasive techniques)
Support Trait: Word Choice (words that enhance persuasion)

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Lesson title: Giving Voice to Opposites

Lesson's Mentor Text: I Am the Dog I Am the Cat by Donald Hall

Focus Trait: Voice (conveying emotion)
Support Trait: Idea Development (showing, not telling)

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Lesson title: "Just the Facts, Ma'am."

Lesson's Mentor Text: The Web Files by Margie Palatini

Focus Trait: Voice (imitating authentic voice)
Support Trait: Conventions (direct address and dialogue punctuation)

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Lesson title: Put 'em on Oprah!

Lesson's Mentor Text: Cindy Ellen: a Wild Western Cinderella by Susan Lowell

Focus Trait: Voice (using realistic dialogue and monologues)
Support Trait: Word Choice (choosing words that convey personality)

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Lesson title: A Pet's Adventure Story

Lesson's Mentor Text: Good Boy, Fergus! by David Shannon

Focus Trait: Voice (conveying emotion)
Support Trait: Conventions (punctuating direct addresses)

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Lesson title: Serendipitous Fairy Tale Tabloids

Lesson's Mentor Text: The Fairy Tale News by Colin and Jacqui Hawkins

Focus Trait: Voice (imitating real world voice)
Support Trait: Idea Development (developing an original idea)

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Lesson title: Voicing an Original Fairy Tale Narrator

Lesson's Mentor Text: The True Story of the Three Little Pigs by Jon Scieszka

Focus Trait: Voice (shifting point of view)
Support Trait: Word Choice (choosing verbs, nouns, an adjectives that are indicative of character)

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Lesson title: Emotional Monologues

Lesson's Mentor Text: My Brother Dan's Delicious by Stephen L. Layne

Focus Trait: Voice (conveying emotion)
Support Trait: Word Choice (choosing words that convey personality)

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Lesson title: Creative Convincing

Lesson's Mentor Text: Click, Clack, Moo: Cows That Type by Doreen Cronin

Focus Trait: Voice (using persuasive techniques)
Support Trait: Organization (practicing friendly letter format)

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9 Word Choice Prompts and Lessons:

Lesson title: Perspective Paragraphs

Lesson's Mentor Text: Tough Boris by Mem Fox

Focus Trait: Word Choice (choosing strong adjectives)
Support Trait: Voice (writing from a character's point-of-view)

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Lesson title: Haiku Riddles

Lesson's Mentor Text: If Not for the Cat by Jack Prelutsky

Focus Trait: Word Choice (using powerful adjectives and verbs)
Support Trait: Idea Development (creating high-quality similes about nature)

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Lesson title: What If Poems

Lesson's Mentor Text: What If by Regina J. Williams

Focus Trait: Word Choice (using precise nouns, and strong verbs and adjectives)
Support Trait: Sentence Fluency (writing with a variety of sentence lengths)

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Lesson title: An Onomatopoetic Field Trip!

Lesson's Mentor Text: Rattletrap Car by Phyllis Root

Focus Trait: Word Choice (exploring and using thoughtful onomatopoeia)
Support Trait: Idea Development (using memorable details)

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Lesson title: Listen to the Word Choice of an Author

Lesson's Mentor Text: Listen to the Rain by Bill Martin Jr. and John Archambault

Focus Trait: Word Choice (choosing words that affect mood)
Support Trait: Organization (structuring a poems into parts)

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Lesson title: Poems to Bug Your Reader

Lesson's Mentor Text: Insectlopedia by Douglas Florian

Focus Trait: Word Choice (playing with words)
Support Trait: Idea Development (exploring a unique idea based on a model)

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Lesson title: Noun-Inspired Animal Reports

Lesson's Mentor Text: We Are Bears by Molly Grooms

Focus Trait: Word Choice (using precise nouns and strong verbs)
Support Trait: Organization (pre-planning a piece of writing's parts or paragraphs)

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Lesson title: Alliterative Insects

Lesson's Mentor Text: Clara Caterpillar by Pamela Duncan Brown

Focus Trait: Word Choice (playing with words)
Support Trait: Idea Development (using memorable details)

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NEW! Lesson title: Hoot and Howl...

Lesson's Mentor Text: Halloween Hoots and Howls by Joan Horton

Focus Trait: Word Choice (using precise nouns, interesting adjectives, strong verbs)
Support Trait: Conventions (spelling)

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8 Sentence Fluency Prompts and Lessons:

Lesson title: Counting Sentences' Words

Lesson's Mentor Text: Owl Moon by Jane Yolen

Focus Trait: Sentence Fluency (varying sentence lengths)
Support Trait: Organization (paragraphing purposefully)

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Lesson title: Special Days to Love

Lesson's Mentor Text: All the Places to Love by Patricia MacLachlan

Focus Trait: Sentence Fluency (varying sentence beginnings and adding prepositional phrases)
Support Trait: Idea Development (using memorable and powerful details)

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Lesson title: Combining with Participial Phrases

Lesson's Mentor Text: Dancing in the Wings by Debbie Allen

Focus Trait: Sentence Fluency (varying sentence beginnings by adding participial phrases)
Support Trait: Conventions (punctuating for internal commas)

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Lesson title: Ain't Gonna Rain No More

Lesson's Mentor Text: I Ain't Gonna Paint No More! by Karen Beaumont

Focus Trait: Sentence Fluency (experimenting with sentence rhythm)
Support Trait: Word Choice (using word play with internal rhymes)

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Lesson title: Impersonating Great Poets

Lesson's Mentor Text: Science Verse by Jon Scieszka

Focus Trait: Sentence Fluency (experimenting with sentence rhythm)
Support Trait: Idea Development (writing with originality, using another's model)

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Lesson title: Animals Not to [Verb] with...

Lesson's Mentor Text: Don't Take Your Snake for a Stroll by Karin Ireland

Focus Trait: Sentence Fluency (experimenting with sentence rhythm)
Support Trait: Word Choice (choosing strong adjectives and verbs)

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Lesson title: School Song Parodies

Lesson's Mentor Text: Take Me Out of the Bathtub and other Silly Dilly Songs by Alan Katz

Focus Trait: Sentence Fluency (experimenting with sentence rhythm)
Support Trait: Idea Development (writing with originality, using another's model)

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Lesson title: Ballads about Family

Lesson's Mentor Text: Family Reunion by Mary Ann Hoberman

Focus Trait: Sentence Fluency (experimenting with sentence rhythm)
Support Trait: Word Choice (choosing strong adjectives and verbs)

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1 Conventions Prompt and Lesson:

Lesson title: A Conventional Family

Lesson's Mentor Text: Punctuation Takes a Vacation by Robin Pulver

Focus Trait: Conventions (thinking about punctuation or parts of speech creatively)
Support Trait: Idea Development (writing with originality, using another's model)

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